Deadline one - feedback

I have looked at all the blogs of those students that i am supervising - all posts have comments left - please read them!

I have indicated a level (1-4) in the comments.

Some outstanding work is rewarded with a level 4.
Rememeber that this is ongoing - you can return to this. So for those of you awarded with a level 3 to level 1, you do have the opportunity to improve. These would be my suggestions as to how you can do this :-

1. Blog atleast 5 films (some people have blogged over 10 films!) each from your own independent research
2. Format - have clear sub headings around the areas that you have been asked to comment upon - Camerawork, editing, mise en scene, sound, narrative structure, audience. Your booklet has detailed guidance on this.
3. If you upload screengrabs (and many of you have), make sure they are anchored to the written text. Don't just use them as decoration - they should be illustrating a point
4. Cherry pick those elements of camerawork, editing, mise en scene and sound that you like and could possibly use when it comes to your own production. The idea is that these can be used as cross references later in your evaluations.
5. You also were suppose to comment on narrative, - the structure, characterisation, and themes and issues.
6.Comments on audience profile

READ YOUR BOOKLET

Remember that Research and Planning" carry 20 marks.